- Opening
Attention-grabbing.
Woman in beige shirt speaks directly to camera.
News article headline about California's governor.
Bar graph showing vote distribution.
Pie chart showing vote distribution.
Election ballot graphic showing ranked choices.
State Representative election results table.
FairVote logo and website address.
- setting
- White wall background.
- on screen people
- One woman, beige shirt.
- captions
- Text overlays provide information.
- text overlays
- Yes, with key points highlighted.
- music
- Not applicable, no audio.
- pace
- Moderate, clear and concise.
- call to action
- Visit fairvote.org.
- visual variety
- Uses graphics and text overlays.
1.9×Clicks, best headline over worst
12,256Headline tests
Starts with “What”, “Why” or “How”6.3% of winners · 8.3% of losers
Carries a number19.1% of winners · 17.2% of losers
Starts with “This” or “These”6.8% of winners · 5.8% of losers
Asks a question14.2% of winners · 18.2% of losers
Says “you” or “your”25.3% of winners · 25.3% of losers
Quotes someone1.2% of winners · 1.2% of losers
Shouts a word in capitals5.1% of winners · 6% of losers
Says “watch”, “see” or “listen”8.2% of winners · 6.7% of losers
Trails off or breaks midline4.6% of winners · 4.9% of losers
First person: “I” or “my”14% of winners · 12% of losers
The same story under different headlines, shown at random, 2013–2015.